Note | Killing Commendatore, Book 2: The Moving Metaphor by Haruki Murakami, Shinchosha, 2017

Information of the Book

Killing Commendatore is the 14th long novel by Haruki Murakami.

Outline and Style

A story of 36 years old male portrait specialized painter. The style is a reminiscence by the man.

Book 2 consists of 32 chapters. The chapters are attached titles of a vague passage.

Characters

Painter (‘I’)

: A portrait specialized painter. Graduated from an art collage.

Yuzu

: Former painter’s wife. Younger than him 3 years. Have a architecture licence and worked at a small architecture office. A classmate of my former girlfriend. The painter fell in love with her at first sight, because she resembles his younger sister. She married with him two times. The interval (live separately to him) was 9 months, and he lived in the valley. When he was 36 years old,

Wataru Menshiki

: A successful IT business entrepreneur. 54 years old well-dressed good-build mysterious man with a curled long white hair. ‘Information buisiness’

Marie Akikawa:

A 13 years old, small, quiet and mysterious girl. A student of the art course run by the painter near the Odawara station, and Mr. Menshiki thought that she is a danger between him and his ex-lover.

Shoko Akikawa

An age 40s elegant, educated woman has big breasts. The aunt of Marie Akikawa. (Older sister of the mother of Marie.) During the paintings of the portrait of Marie, she read a covered thick paparback always in the living room of the painter’s house. She unexpectedly fall in love with Wataru Menshiki.

Masahiko Amada

Tomohiko Amada (40)

Mother of Marie Akikawa (33)

Tsuguhiko Amada (36, 37)

Yoshinobu Akikawa (39)

Colleague of Masahiko Amada (42)

: Yuzu’s lover.

‘Long Face’ (51, 52)

The man without face (53, 54)

Donna Anna (54, 55)

Muro (64)

: A daughter between Yuzu and the painter or lover of Yuzu.

Locations

Upper part of the mountain near the entrance of a narrow valley

: The place where the painter stayed. The former atelier of Tomohiko Amada in the suburban Odawara city. The painter actually borrow from Masahiko Amada of the reason of worry about theft and fire.

Culture shool in the front of Odawara station

: The painter was introduced there by Masahiko Amada. He taught dessin and water colour on Wednesday and Friday.

Mr Menshiki’s house

: A big elegant white house.

A Small Shrine

Hole Under the Small Shrine

Metaphor path (52, )

Key Elements

‘Killing Commendatore’

: A painting work by Tomohiko Amada. It was painted a violent scene of the Asuka era. A young man thrusts the breast of a old man by a heavy sword. A young women a male servant see this duel. And the strange man sees the scene from a hole of the left lower edge part of the painting.

Bell like an Ancient Instrument (15 -)

: buddhist instrument

portrait of Mr. Menshiki (, 18, 19)

The portrait of white Subaru Forester (20, 22, )

portrait of Marie Akikawa

painting of the hole in a bush

binoculars of Mr. Menshiki

penguin amulet (figure) (46, 47)

kitchen knife of Masahiko Amada

double metaphor (55)

Summaries and Memoirs

33. I Like Things We Can See The Same As Things We Can’t See

Next Sunday, Marie and Shoko Akikawa visited the house of the painter again. The painter said ‘Canvas is only a plain tableau but picture should be painted as “three-dimensional”’. time, Converse; dessin; croquis; training

  • ‘Three-dimensional’ the painter said means ‘meaningful’ and ‘of much substance’.

During the painting, again, Shoko Akikawa read a covered thick paperback. The painter began to draw a portrait of Marie, but he can’t grasp her particularity and context to draw the canvas. So they talked about her family and his dead sister. three-dimensional; story; one straight line; scent of summer

Marie looked incomplete the portrait of the man of white Subaru Forester, and said ‘this picture has sufficient power already’. vice

Then Marie looked Killing Commendatore, and said ‘I like this picture. It appeals something, and lead us anywhere where we can decide neither right nor wrong’.

stock of memory; time

When they backed to the living room, Shoko Akikawa was reading the thick paperback still. She said ‘I have a superstition. If I tell the title of a book which I read, I wouldn’t finish reading the book, somehow’. The painter suggested he cook something and have a dinner together. Then they had a dinner of simple pasta and salad. superstition; handiwork; intellectuel play; Jaguar; Toyota Prius

34. I See, Recently, I Don’t Measure An Air Pressure

Mr. Menshiki visited the painter’s house suddenly. He was shaken up, because Marie Akikawa was in the house. When the painter try to introduce Marie and Shoko to Menshiki, but Menshiki went out and he measured the air pressure of his car, was being upset. Then the painter introduced Mr. Menshiki to Shoko and Marie in the living room. They talked together, but Menshiki can’t look Marie straight in the face. Mr. Menshiki said the portrait of him drew by the painter is ‘not a so-called portrait, it’s a painting drew by a profound view’. So Marie said ‘I wanna see it’, and Menshiki introduced Marie and Shoko to his house. portrait

In the front of the house, Mr. Menshiki and Shoko talked about his newest Jaguar coupé and cars. Shoko asked that she can test drive his car, and Menshiki allowed it. She enjoyed the sound and feeling of Jaguar. After the left of Marie and Akikawa, Menshiki and the painter talked about the impression of Marie in the living room. newest Jaguar coupé; Jaguar XJ6 Series 3; Toyota Prius; salade niçoise; odor; E type; roadster; Charlie Mingus; Ray Brown; impression as a picture; objective fact; meaning or the life

direction sense; magnetic force

35. You Should the Place Remain As It Were

At the night, Marie Akikawa suddenly visited the house of the painter. They talked about the small shrine and Marie said ‘the place should remain as it were’. Marie told that Mr. Menshiki conceals anything in his heart, his strange eyes have an intentionality always. And she told ‘teacher, I’m glad to your painting my portrait’. Cleveland Indians; Immanuel Kant; Königsberg; ‘Es ist Gut’; visual memory; strange eye; presentiment

Marie said ‘I heard the sound of bell from the small shrine’. The painter went to the studio, and the bell was vanished.

36. You Must Not Talk Together About The Rule of The Game

scotch whisky

The following morning, the painter went to the small shrine, and meditated in the hole. He thought the hole thinks and is living, and felt his thought and hole’s are confused. There’s the feeling of the world of after death.

  • The hole of small shrine is the same of the well as symbol in other Murakami’s works.

The day, he felt that he want to draw something in the studio. He drew a painting of the hole. The painter looked the painting like a female genitalia by the ‘Freud’s interpretation’. Freud; Richard Strauss; Der Rosenlavalier; George Solti

The painter and 41 years old woman talked about ‘the game’ they play. And she said ‘I want we won’t talk about the rule of the game’. a kind of game; courtesy (manner); trust; respect

  • The ‘game’ they mentioned is apparently implied or signified Wittgenstein’s language game. To shut up about the rule is an important thing of the language game. Also Murakami mentioned the language game in some his essays.

The evening, Mr. Menshiki called the painter, and told the past of Tomohiko Amada in Vienna according to the Anschluss and the Kristallnacht, and about his younger brother Tsuguhiko Amada. He fought as a soldier in Nanjing 1938 (he would commit the Nanjing massacre) and committed suicid soon after his discharge. Gestapo; Nazi Germany; Anschluss; Kristallnacht; Hitler; Resistance; Spanish Civil War; Guernica; the Roongdo bridge accident; the Nanjing massacre; German-Japan Defence Agreement (Antikominternpakt); the Tokyo Music School; Tokyo Art University

The painter and Masahiko Amada talked by telephone. Aso; Yotsuya; old Jaguar

37. There’s a Positive Side in Whatever Things

The painter visited the company of Masahiko Amada. They taleked about Tomohiko and Tsuguhiko Amada, and about golf. Odawara; Tokyo; Shibuya; Yotsuya; Aoyama; Perrier; Haryana; Zushi; consience; sanctuary; spirit; power of will; the Pacific War; Chopin; Debussy; Hangzhou; pipe organ; traum; fragile; Yangtze River; Mauthausen; Gestapo; Munich Agreement; Berlin; Tokyo;

38. Because of That, I Can’t Become a Dolphin

idea; process; imagination;

On Sunday, Marie and Shoko Akikawa visited again to paint the portrait of Marie. Missoni; Converse; third person’s element

a form; complex of light and darkness; intercourse; memory; Van Gogh; collective memory;

pleasant fatigue;

Mr. Menshiki visited the house to pick up Marie and Shoko. Mr. Menshiki said ‘To be drawn a portrait is like to be robbed a soul’, but Marie denied his opinion and said there’s a intercourse. act of art

The idea ‘Commendatore’ appeared in the front of the painter. And he said idea needs energy as perception by other, so he is omnipotent because man can’t stop thinking. concept of time; habit; energy; dolphin; neutral idea; E=mc2; atomic bomb; Hiroshima; Nagasaki; caveat emptor;

  • Philosophy of Zen or Spinoza

will;

39. A Camouflaged Case Made for a Specific Aim

After the go home of Marie and Shoko, the painter and Mr. Menshiki talked about Marie and his father Yoshinobu Akikawa. accident; Trojan horse; egoistic; Jaguar E Type; old Meissen; strange feeling; transitional being; the World War 2; India; reincarnation; whiskey; single malt; Scotland; Islay isle; Prince of Weals; Jura isle; George Orwell; 1984; caveat emptor; Olive; George Solti; Vienna Philharmonic Orchestra; strategy (preparation); laziness; ego;

40. I Can’t Make For the Face

The midnight, the painter woke up by a loud crash noise. He went to the studio and see the spirit of Tomohiko Amada.

41. Only When I Don’t Look Back

The painter met the ‘real spirit’ of Tomohiko Amada in the studio. He only gazed his own work Killing Commendatore with his strong concentration. gohst; spirit; phantom;

spirit; life; Izu;

Toyota Corolla Wagon; silver Jaguar;

/

42. Dropped On the Floor and Cracked, It’s a Egg

Glico Pockey; Captain Achab;

The painter continued to paint the portrait of Marie Akikawa and the painting of the hole everyday. realism;

Chivas Regal; a total narrative;record

black Volvo wagon; Itoh; sashimi; Tokyo;

The painter and Masahiko Amada talked about Tomohiko, paintings of the painter and Yuzu. Masahiko told ‘Yuzu’s lover is his colleague and she is pregnant now’. egg; courtesy; Captain Achab;

Izu;

43. It Shouldn’t End in Only a Dream

Tohoku; Hokkaido; Aomori; Hakodate; Shimokita Peninsula; sexual dream

The painter remembered a real sexual dream he saw in an unpopulated hotel of Aomori, in which he had a hard sex with sleeping Yuzu.

He thought he had a sex with Yuzu really.

The same time, Yuzu had been pregnant. So, the painter thought Yuzu was been pregnant by him.  indigenous chaos

Jane Austin; Dostoïevski; Demos; Kirillov; Russia; freedom; idiocy

reality; unreality; interconnection; succubus

44. Like a Characteristic a Man Is the Man

The painter drew the portrait of Marie Akikawa again. secret sign of my self

Marie and the painter promised they met there in the evening. gohst

In the evening, Marie visited the painter’s house and talked about Mr. Menshiki. square box; lunch box from Sweden; friend; military binoculars; unusual power

  • Amada’s black old Volvo wagon is a metapher of coffin?

Next, they talked about the small shrine.

Chevas Regal

45. Anything Will Happen

The painter completed the painting of the hole. own will and claim; un line divides uncompleted and completed; will; intention; record

  • The hall is the same as the symbol of well in other Murakami’s works.

Before the work of the culture school, the painter shopped second-hand records and ate a soba with tempura. After the work, Shoko Akikawa called him and tolled Marie was vanished. Odawara; Starbucks; deep black coffee; Billy Holiday; Clifford Brown; Bob Dylan; Nashville Skyline; Alabama Song; the Doors; Bruce Springsteen; the River; Roberta Flack; Donny Hathaway; soba with tempura

In the studio, the painter looked his own paintings, and he thought anything has triggered by the complete of the painting of the hole. The painter called Mr. Menshiki and asked him to come here.

46. A High Strong Wall Make Men Powerless

The painter and Mr Menshiki went to the small shrine. omnious prediction; spirituality

Mr. Menshiki got into the hale and found a penguin figure probably Marie Akikawa laid there. the Berlin Wall; wall; 3m; the Tokyo Jail; ministry system; Spanish; Turkish; Chinese; trial; penguin figure; sign of innocence

47. Today is Friday, isn’t it?

Shoko Akikawa called the painter and she said Marie had the figure for a cell phone strap. donut shop

  • Donut is the important metaphor in Murakami’s works. It signifies the entrance to the alter (alien) world.

The painter and Mr. Menshiki talked about the mean of the penguin amulet of Marie Akikawa and why she put it on bottom of the hale. Beethoven; violin sonata; George Klekamp; Wilhelm Kemp; Richard Strauss; concerto for oboe

The commendatore appeared in the front of the painter. world of humans; time; space; probability; blood should be shed; public language; private language

  • Philosophy of language by Wittgenstein

48. Spanishes Didn’t Know How to Sail the Offshore of Ireland

Armada; Elizabeth l; Felipe ll

Mr Menshiki confessed he fell in love with Shoko Akikawa and they had became a intimate relationship. equation;velocity; motive; mere vancancy; man of emptiness; T. S. Eliot; hollow men

Masahiko Amada called the painter and he suggested go to Izu to see his father Tomohiko with him. Izu; Tomei Highway; Catholic

In his car, Masahiko told women’s faces are different left to right and women have two personalities. Amagi plateau; Izu plateau; senility; hit songs of 80’s; Duran Duran; Huey Louis; ABC; Look of Love; FM radio; Google; Mac (Macintosh); Bertie Higgins; Key Largo; Batman; Two Face; Scott Fitzgerald; paranoïa

  • Amada’s talk resembles a famous Murakami’s metapher line divides left and right.

Richard Strauss; Beethoven’s symphony; Vienna Philharmonic Orchestra; blank (emptiness); Deborah Harry; French Kissin in the USA; Rayban

49. It’s Full with Same Numbers of Deaths as It

On the way to the hospital, the painter saw the man of white Subaru Forester at a family restaurant. sandwich; wthite Subaru Forester; tadpoles

The painter and Masahiko Amada arrived a hospital Tomohiko Amada was then hospital. Masahiko and the painter talked about Yuzu, her pregnancy and her lover. white Honda minivan; dark bleu Audi sedan; Bananarama; Manazuru Penninshula; Fiji

They arrived the room hospitalized Tomohiko. Tomohiko awoke. The painter tried to talk to Tomohiko. Tomohiko seemed to be reacted by the words ‘horned owl’, ‘loft’ and ‘safekeeping of paintings’. The mobile phone of Masahiko rang and he left to answer, so the painter and Tomohiko was left in the room. horned owl

50. It Demands a Sacrifice and a Trial

The Commendatore emerged. And he said he knew where Marie Akikawa was, to help out her demands not a few sacrifice and trial and the painter need to kill the Commendatore. sympathey; quiz; sacrifice; trial

51. Now’s the Time (Here Comes)

The Commendatore said a set of reaction caused by his death leads the painter to a place Marie stay. set of reactions; Point Blank; Lee Marvin; Don Giovanni; allegory; returning (loop)

The painter and the Commendatore talked about the past of Tomohiko Amada. Nazi; Gestapo; Battle of Nanjing; helplessness; hopelessness (despair)

The consciousness of Tomohiko Amada temporary returned by his all of capacities. And the Commendatore said ‘you must kill me during his consciousness returns’. cause and result; destiny

The painter thrusted the Commendatore by Masahiko’s kitchen knife to kill. The idea Commendatore died as a symbolic act but the blood shed and the physical body killed in a reality. Tomohiko Amada watched it and he returned to a coma state. evil father; physical body; symbolic act

52. A Man Wears An Orange Triangle Hat

The ‘Long Face’ emerged on the corner of the room and he seemed to watch the incident. The painter tied the Long Face on the bed foot to not to set free him. And he questioned about where Marie is and who the Long Face is. He answered he is a metaphor, he came from the ‘metaphor path’ and in there dangerous living thing ‘double metaphors’ live. Then the painter went in to the metaphor path. Asuka Era; Pacific Ocean; Atsugi Base; Maritime Self-Defensive Force; relativeness between phenomenon and expression; the world moved by relativeness; sacrifice; trial

53. It Must Be a Fire Hook

The painter continued to walk in the metaphor path. That is a barren colourless world created by metaphor of people. Then he reached a pier and found a tall man standed there. cheese toast; black coffee; Decca; metaphor; simile; Beethoven; Symphony No. 7; Winner Waltz; sweet Sachertorte; Hakenkreuz; unconsciouness

  • The metaphor path resembles the underground world the Dark Blacks live in ‘Hard-Boiled Wonderland and the End of the World’.

54. Eternity is A Very Long Time

The man had no face. His had head but his face is blank. He said ‘you want to cross this river you should pay a alternative’. So the painter gave the penguin figure of Marie as a transfer fee to the man without face. alternative; eternity

They reached the opposite shore. And the man said ‘There’s no need of direction or way. Your acts bring relativeness matches them’. verge between being and null; relativeness

The painter started to walk on the opposite land. There’s no senses of time and direction. Then he reached woods. In the woods he felt he was watched by many eyes. The eyes made by his fear and suspicion. Walked long time, he saw a point of light from far away. He want through the woods and reached very high cliff and found a cave like the wind hole of Mt. Fuji. He entered the cave and realized the point light is a cantera. Under the light, a lady was standing. She is a draughtier of the Commendatore in Mozart’s Don Giovannni, Donna Anna. sense; time; derection; consciousness

55. It Obviously Contradicts The Principle

In the cave, Donna Anna told the painter that he should enter the hole. The hole resembles the hole Komichi entered in the wind hole of Mr. Fuji, their childhood, but it is bigger. He entered the hole and healed voice of Komichi. She said ‘Go.’ And ‘Remember the things you think nostalgic and concrete things’. He penetrated the narrow space by he abdicated reason and thought all things are metaphor and relative things. things like that; outcome by relativeness; light is the metaphor of shadow; shadow is the metaphor of light; the best metaphor; alter new reality; double metaphor; Yonex; Peugeot 205

  • Semiology, Structuralism
  • Sigmund Freud

He was thrown out to a wide space. Then he realized he was in the hole of small shrine (in the real world). And there’s the bell like an Ancient instrument.

56. There Should be Blanks We Must Fill In

The hole was shut up by anyone. time

  • Philosophy of Bergson

He reflected he can only ring the bell in the hole, and he do it. air; love; idea

  • The description in this clause resembles the experience of Sgt. Mamiya in a well at Nomonhan in Wind-up Bird Chronicle.

He felt the time he seemed as eternity passed, someone opened the cap of the hole. Mr. Menshiki opened the cap and said ‘Are you all right?’. Menshiki told Marie got back home safely. The painter realized three days passed in the metaphor path. In the painter’s house, Mr. Menshiki made a perfect omelette and talked about happenings of three days. time; connection to himself; eternity; rain; logical

57. The Thing I Should Do Someday

/

questions; facts; real world

40 years old girlfriend called the painter and she said they wouldn’t meet again. indication

/

58. It’s Like I Hear a Story of a Beautiful Canal on Mars

The painter called Masahiko Amada, and apologized and explained his vanishment. Hitchcock; Social Ethics

Sapporo Bier

The painter called Yuzu and they made appointment at the evening of next Monday. Go-go’s; Chablis

Shoko Akikawa called the painter and told that Marie was safe and said nothing her vanishing, so Shoko asked the painter to meet and talk with Marie. Bruce Springsteen; The River; Independence Day; Hungry Heart; Lubber Soul; Pet Sounds; E Street Band; Cadillac Ranch

Shoko called again and told she and Marie would visit at 15:00 that day.

59. Until the Death Divides the Two Persons

The painter asked Shoko to leave only him and Marie because it was good for Marie. Shoko left the house during two hours. The painter talked about the painting Killing Commendatore, the hole at the small shrine, the idea Commendatore, the metaphor path, the man of white Subaru Forester and ‘double metaphor’, and Marie was only hearing. Marie answered she met the Commendatore and she had seen Tomohiko Amada was painting pictures. Then they sealed the paintings Killing Commendatore and the man.of white Subaru Forester and concealed them to the attic. horned owl; wisdom of forest

60. If the Person Had a Very Long Arm

She accounted for she was in Menshiki’s house. She sneaked into the house to know his personality by her curiosity, but she can’t escape from there during three days.

In the house, Marie found out many old women’s clothes. (The clothes are her mother’s.) Raiders of the Lost Ark; Indiana Jones; hornet; Steinway grand piano; Bach; invention; Mozart; Piano Sonatas; Chopin; Apple; hobbits of Rhine River

61. You Must Be A Courageous And Wise Girl

(…)

62. It Had A Taste Like A Deep Maze

(…)

63. But It Is Not the Thing You Think

(…)

64. As a Form of Grace

(…)

Analyses and Remarks

Details of the Book

Killing Commendatore, Book 2: The Moving Metaphor
Haruki Murakami
Sinchosha, Tokyo, 24 February 2017
544 pages
ISBN: 9784103534334

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Note | Killing Commendatore, Book 1: The Appearing Idea by Haruki Murakami, Shinchosha, 2017

Information of the Book

Killing Commendatore is the 14th long novel by Haruki Murakami.

Outline and Style

A story of 36 years old male portrait specialized painter. The style is a reminiscence by the man.

Book 1 consists of 32 chapters. The chapters are attached titles of a vague passage.

Characters

Painter (‘I’)

: A portrait specialized painter. Graduated from an art collage.

Yuzu

: Former painter’s wife. Younger than him 3 years. Have a architecture licence and worked at a small architecture office. A classmate of my former girlfriend. The painter fell in love with her at first sight, because she resembles his younger sister. She married with him two times. The interval (live separately to him) was 9 months, and he lived in the valley. When he was 36 years old,

Wataru Menshiki (7 -)

: A successful IT business entrepreneur. 54 years old well-dressed good-build mysterious man with a curled long white hair.

Masahiko Amada

: Collage class mate with him. When he graduated from the Art Collage, gave up job of painting, and got a employment at an advertising agency.

Tomohiko Amada

: A 92 years old famous painter of Japanese painting. Graduated from Tokyo School of Art (present Tokyo Art University), he studied abroad oil painting at Wien from 1936 to 1938. He converted to Japanese painting during the Pacific War because of .

A later twenties married woman slept with the painter (1)

: A married later twenties women with a characteristic face, suffered domestic violence by her history private high-school teacher husband.

A 41 years old married woman slept with the painter

: The another was a wealthy 41 years old woman with chic outfits and a firm body, and her husband run a company.

Manager of a art agent (, 3)

Komichi (3, 10, 23)

: Younger sister of the painter. She suddenly dead at 12 years old by the heart disease when he was 15 years old.

‘Long face’ (5)

Ex-lover of Menshiki (13)

: Mr. Menshiki associated with her till 13 years ago. She married with other man without noticing. Mr. Menshiki thinks she may give birth his child seven months after the marriage. But she died 7 years ago.

Man of White Subaru Forester (19)

: A middle aged gray-haired man run after a girl.

A late twenties girl (19, 27)

: A late twenties girl with a uncharacteristic face and usual clothes. The painter came across her at a family restaurant in Miyagi. She run away from the man of white Subaru Forester.

Commendatore (21 -)

: Idea. A 60 cm height small man wears the clothes of the Asuka era from the painting work ’Killing Commendatore’ by Tomohiko Amada. He isn’t a ghost, is a ‘idea’ exists in some restrictions and forms himself between few hours in a day, and speaks by a strange ancient way of speaking. He had became a pure idea and he has no liner memory.

Young bartender (23, 24)

Chef (24)

Marie Akikawa (25, 28, 30)

A 13 years old, small, quiet and mysterious girl. A student of the art course run by the painter near the Odawara station, and Mr. Menshiki thought that she is a danger between him and his ex-lover.

Shoko Akikawa (30)

A early forties grace woman, an aunt of Marie Akikawa. She accompanied Marie when the painter drew the portrait of Marie. During the painter drew the portrait, she read a covered thick paperback made a secret the title in the living room of the painter’s house.

Man without face (prologue)

: A tall man without face, and wears a black cap and a dark long coat.

Locations

Upper part of the mountain near the entrance of a narrow valley

: The place where the painter stayed. The former atelier of Tomohiko Amada in the suburban Odawara city. The painter actually borrow from Masahiko Amada of the reason of worry about theft and fire.

Culture shool in the front of Odawara station

: The painter was introduced there by Masahiko Amada. He taught dessin and water colour on Wednesday and Friday.

Mr Menshiki’s house

: A big elegant white house.

A Small Shrine

Hole Under the Small Shrine

Key Elements

penguin amulet (prologue)

‘Killing Commendatore’

: A painting work by Tomohiko Amada. It was painted a violent scene of the Asuka era. A young man thrusts the breast of a old man by a heavy sword. A young women a male servant see this duel. And the strange man sees the scene from a hole of the left lower edge part of the painting.

Cheap second-handed car

: Power blued Toyota Corolla Wagon

portrait

Jungle Network (8)

Jungle Network means a word-of-mouth network among married women and housewives.

Akinari Ueda

opera

Bell like an Ancient Instrument (15 -)

: buddhist instrument

The portrait of Mr. Menshiki (, 18, 19)

idea (21)

The portrait of white Subaru Forester (20, 22, )

binoculars (24,)

Summaries and Memoirs

Prologue

A man without face visited a room of a painter and ask him to draw his face. But The painter can’t draw his ‘face’, because there’s mere nothingness. And the man has no time and left the room.

1. If the Surface is Misty

From May of the year to the begging of the next year, A painter lived an upper part of the mountain near the entrance of a narrow valley. From the house it can see the nasty part of the see and the imaginative mountain scene.

At the time, The painter and his wife divorced temporarily during nine months, and they can’t well understand why they devorced. And he can’t comprehend the time was short or long, the mean of the chaotic time and amazing events of the time.

  • Henri Bergson’s durée

An art collage classmate Masahiko Amada lent the painter the house of former his father’s atelier, the reason of ‘The house would fall into ruin, and there’s anxiety of theft and fire’. His father is the famous painter of Japanese painting and had entered a high-grade nursing home in Izu. powder bleu Toyota Corolla Wagon

The time of divorce, the painter had an affair with two women. Both were the students of a painting class ran by him.

When the painter was a art collage student, he made big abstract paintings. But, to earn his daily bread, he began to do the jobs of portrait painting. Somehow, his portrait paintings had got evaluations by the clients. To make portraits as a labour is easier than other labour works and abstract painting.

When he paint a portrait, he meets and interview with a client, and received snapshots of the client. he paints a portrait by the three-dimensional visual memory of a client not a client itself.

He started an independent business as a portrait-specialized-painter. Sometimes he feels ‘I’m a high-grade prostitute in painting’. But the time he were 36 years old and should wash his hands of the business.

2. Eveyone May Go to the Moon

A evening of middle of march before one month to the 6th wedding anniversary, the painter’s wife told him that she wanna divorce to him immediately by a dream she had. So he went away the home within the day.

In a hurry, he heaped up necessities and artist’s materials to his red Peugeot 205. Then his wife told me that ‘Can I remain your friend?’. red Peugeot 205

He wandered about aimlessly Tokyo by the car. Sheryl Crow’s first album

He headed for the north by highways and reached the side of the Japanese Sea. Octet by Mendelssohn; I Musici Chamber Orchstra; MJQ (Modern Jazz Quartet); Pyramid; Milt Jackson

He reached Hokkaido, then for three weeks he wandered about Hokkaido. In the later half of April he headed to Japanese mainland along the side of the Pacific.

  • In some parts of this novel, Murakami uses ‘ore’ as a subject pronoun of the narrator. ‘Ore’ is one of Japanese subject pronoun, adult men use. Usually Murakami uses ‘boku’ (male children and young men’s subject pronoun) or ‘watashi’ (subject pronoun of women and adult men) as a subject pronoun by the narrator.

The painter met with his wife when ‘I’ was few before 30 years old. After 6 months to the first meeting, he married with her. She worked at a architecture office and he worked at home to paint portraits.

He couldn’t think of the reason why Yuzu wanted to divorce. They spent a good married life he thought.

He felt fatigue by wandering, so he stayed a little old spa treatment spot in the mountain at border of Miyagi prefecture and Iwate prefecture. To the way to Tokyo, his red little Peugeot 205 was broken. So he returned Tokyo by train. At Tokyo, He called for Masahiko Amada to explained his circumstances, then Masahiko told him that ‘There’s a good house just for you’.

3. It’s Only a Physical Reflection

After the wandering, the painter phoned Yuzu from the house in Odawara, because he want to take back his belongings left in Yuzu’s room.

He went to the mansion at Hiroo and took back his belongings.

He called the agent of art and told that ‘I will never paint a portrait again.’. The manager said ‘I think you have a special ability to make portrait’. Rolling Stones;

Tomohiko Amada’s atelier is a Western style cottage (cabin) unsuspectedly. In the house there were huge Tannoy speakers, Marantz vacuum tube amp and fine record collection of opera. Masahiko Amada said his father is a fan of opera, and he went to opera theatres frequently when he studied abroad at Vienna, and he studied modern Western fine art. Volvo; Tannoy; Maranz

The painter taught dessin and water colour at a culture school in the front of Odawara station on Wednesday and Friday.

4. To See from a Distance, Almost All Things Look Beautiful

The (former) studio of Tomohiko Amada motivated the painter, but he had no idea of which he wants to draw.

Puccini; Turandot; La Bohème;

Two days of the weeks he and a 41 years old married women had affairs at the house.

They purely enjoyed the sexual connection in body.

He read Tomohiko Amada’s books and listened Amada’s records remained in the house, and shared with Amada the mind. Beethoven; Schubert

He was interested in the personality and the works of Tomohiko Amada. He researched the books about him in the Odawara City Library.

Tomohiko Amada drew sceneries of the ancient Japan especially the Asuka era. He had studied abroad western oil painting at Wien. But he suddenly backed to Japan in 1938. After the Second World War, he vividly debuted again as a Japanese art artist. Shotoku Taishi; Wien; the Second World War; Hitler;  Anschluss; attack on Pearl Harbour;

The painter think he should study by the life and works of Tomohiko Amada in some means.

There was a big gorgeous white modern house on the opposing side of valley. And the owner may spend a elegant liberty life.

At that time, he didn’t think the man and the painting Killing Commendatore would affect his life.

5. Breathlessly, also Hands and Feet are Cold

In the house (atelier) of Tomohiko Amada, there’s no painting by himself and other painters. There’s a trace of Tomohiko Amada in the air. Matis; Blacque; Wien

One day, the painter accidentally found a painting work Killing Commendatore by Tomohiko Amada when he entered the attic to find a horned owl. horned owl; Killing Commendatore

He unpacked the wrapping of Killing Commendatore without agreements of Tomohiko and Masahiko Amada. The picture is Japanese art was drew a violent scene of the Asuka era. The painter hit on the painting is connected with Mozart’s opera Don Giovanni. Asuka era

For few weeks, he spent only seeing Killing Commendatore with listening to a record of Don Giovanni.

Quotation from Don Giovanni.

6. Until Now, He is a Client without Face

The painter got a mysterious request of paint a portrait by the art agent. The client offered a extraordinary reward and he requested to paint the portrait by face to face. The client lived near the house, and he said he would visit to paint the portrait. Nike; Banana Republic; Starbucks

7. Good or Bad, The Name Easy to Memorize

It’s necessity to draw vivid portrait is the ability to grasp a core in client’s face. Mr. Wataru Menshiki visited the atelier by his silver Jaguar sport coupe. Mr. Menshiki told his house is very near the atelier. He said something like a genuine personality exist on the portraits painted by the painter. Mr. Menshiki asked him to draw freely without a restriction as portrait and said Mr. Menshiki was glad to accept adopting a unusual manner. silver Jaguar sport coupe; Don Giovanni; Prague

The painter realized Mr. Menshiki may have motive for other purpose. Edger Allan Poe

8. Unusual Blessing

The painter searched the word ‘Menshiki’ by Google at an Internet Café in the front of Odawara station, but he couldn’t find the information about him. He called Masahiko Amada to ask about Mr. Menshiki. Google; Facebook

41 years old married women called the painter. He asked her about Mr. Menshiki.

Masahiko called again and he told the painter that he couldn’t find the information about Mr Menshiki and Menshiki may get rid of information about himself. Rendrandt; Doraqroi; Andy Wahhohl; ’Blessing in disguise.’

  • For the first time, the appearance of the internet in Murakami’s novel.

The painter had a love affair with the married woman. He talked with her about Mr Menshiki and she said she would search by the Jungle Network.

  • Jungle Network means a word-of-mouth network among married women and housewives.

After the affair, the painter saw the pure clean house of Mr Menshiki. And he thought ‘the whiteness is a kind of colour’.

9. Exchanging Their Own Pieces

Mr Menshiki went to the painter’s house. They talked about to paint a portrait. The painter told ‘I should critically find the essence of a model’. Mr Menshiki said ‘You may reproduce (represent) a form from a visual memory’, ‘Your works are different to portrait as a pure commercial article’ and ‘I want to paint portrait as an exchange (interchange)’. Starbucks

  • An important part of this novel. This discussion is a notion, a theory or a criticism to create art works, to write novel and to Haruki Murakami himself.

They went to the studio. The painter made Mr Menshiki sit a stool. Georg Solti; Richard Strauss; Ein Heldenleben; Vienna Philharmonic Orchestra; Wagner; Karajan; Erich Kleiber

The painter drew 5 pieces of dessins but he could’t draw the Mr. Menshiki’s face well because he couldn’t grasp the essential image of Mr. Menshiki. Then Mr. Menshiki talked about bits of himself, and they talked about the history of Japanese art. And the talk reached a philosophical discussion about an unconscious common sense, a difficulty of putting into words a self-evidence and a definition of the self in the front of other(s). Meiji Restration; Tenshin Okakura; Fenollosa

The painter reflected about Mr. Menshiki. He can’t draw Mr. Menshiki finely because he can’t grasp the core (heart) of a being as Menshiki.

10. We Push Away Green Grass Highly Grow Thick…

Younger sister of the painter suddenly dead at 12 years old by the heart disease when he was 15 years old. He drew her many times to stock the ‘current memory’ of her.

He suffered the extreme claustrophobia by recalling the sight of his sister was put into a small coffin, rocked and sent to the cerematory.

41 years old married woman told the information about Mr. Menshiki from the ‘Jungle Network’. Jaguar; Range Rover; Mini Cooper; BMW;  Bluebeard’s Castle

After the death of painter’s sister, the relation of his family was broken, and he wanted to concentrate on painting pictures so he went to the art collage.

11. Moon Light Brightened All Things There Were

At 1:45 of a Sunday midnight, the painter woke up, then he realized a tone of a bell rung from a small shrine on a mountain behind. He went the small shrine and confirmed that the bell rung from inside the shrine. By a omnicent feeling, he got back to the house. The tone stopped at 2:31 AM.

On evening of the day, the painter went the small shrine again. The small serine looked shabby in the sunlight. The painter try to draw the portrait of Menshiku, but he can’t.

In the midnight of the next day, the painter heard the tone of bell again.

12. Like That Nameless Postman

Mr. Menshiki visited again painter’s studio. Still the painter couldn’t grasp and draw the portrait of Mr. Menshiki. Richard Strauss; Ein Heldenleben; van Gogh

  • In this chapter, the painter states the notion about painting portrait. Almost all ’auto pilot’ task.

The painter said ‘Anyhow I can’t draw well a ’portrait’ of conventional form as a work’. But Mr. Menshiki said he has a sound curiousity and he want to only the painter represent the shape as it is which his eyes grasp. that Postman of Arles

After the painting, the painter talked to Mr. Menshiki about the occurrences of ringing bell from the small shrine. Then Mr. Menshiki said he want to visit at this night.

Wiener Konzerthaus streicherquartett; Schubert; Tchaikovsky; Rachmaninov; Sibelius; Vivaldi; Debussy; Ravel; Verdy; Puccini; German Opera; Bach; Brahms; Schumann; Beethoven; Mozart

13. At Present, It is Just a Hypothesis Only

The painter and Mr. Menshiki talked about having a child. Then Mr. Menshiki told about ex-lover he associated with 13 years ago, and he inferred she may gave birth his child, but the ex-lover died 7 years ago. Ginza; Akasaka

After her death, Mr. Menshiki got her letter from her lawyer. Judged by the content of her letter, he supposed her child may be his child.

He investigated the child by his lawyer.

14. However, That’s the Strange Incident I Meet First

The painter and Mr. Menshiki went to the small shrine and they found someone rang a bell or something in the small shrine.

Then they returned the house of the painter. They drunk Scotch whiskey and Mr. Menshiki told this incident resembles a thriller in Spring Rain Stories by Akinari Ueda. Scotch whisky; White Label; Akinari Ueda; Spring Rain Stories; Bond of Second Generation

The painter called Masahiko Amada to got approval by him to dig the small shrine.

The painter read Bond of Second Generation by Arinari Ueda.

Mr. Menshiki called the painter and he said he ordered gardeners to dig up the small shrine.

15. It’s Only a Beginning

At 10 AM of a Wednesday morning, the work began.

During the work, the painter and Mr. Menshiki talked about Sokushinbutsu and Nirvana.

Mozart; Sonata for Piano and Violin; Tannoy; Autograph; George Szell; Rafael Druian; Thelonious Monk; Monk’s Music; Coleman Hawkins; John Coltrane;

Under the small shrine, there’s a hole, inside the hole there’s a room made by stones, and the bottle of the hole there’s a bell. Mr. Menshiki went in the room and handed the bell to the painter. Then Mr. Menshiki suggested this room should be investigated by the gardener.

16. A Relatively Better Day

That night the painter can’t fall asleep by the care about the bell.

The next afternoon, the painter went on with the portrait of Mr. Menshiki and he painted it only for himself. After the work, he felt a good sensation of beginning in the air of autumn evening.

At 21:00 of the day, Mr. Menshiki called the painter and they talked about the worth of the event of the day. Menshiki said they had obtained something can’t be digitized by the digging.

Married woman called the painter and they did a phone sex. Tonny Bennett; Nietzsche; Shopenhauer

17. Why Do I Missed the Very Important Thing

The painter remembered Yuzu said ‘Can we remain friends as they are? If you can?’. significance of topos; local rule

The painter gave careful consideration to and struggle with the portrait of Mr. Menshiki. Then the portrait became a work is quite different from a usual portrait. common nothingness (commonplace of absence); Annie Laurie

At 11 AM, Mr. Menshiki came to the house of the painter. V8 engin

18. Curiosity Kills Not Only Cats

The painter and Mr. Menshiki went to the small shrine. Mr. Menshiki said he want to enter and shut himself up in the hall they had dug up. Fumimaro Konoe; Hakone; Atami; curiousity; risk

Mr. Menshiki stayed in the hall covered by a lid (cover) an hour.

Sherlock Holms; Dr. Watson; shadow

The painter told Mr. Menshiki that his portrait was completed in ’a meaning’, but it’s not a portrait, it’s a rather ’a work is modeled on you’. And he said ‘I drew the thing I shouldn’t drew and pull out in you’. Then the painter showed the ‘portrait’ of Menshiki, and Menshiki said ’It’s excellent.’ and ‘You discovered this picture, you found out an image buried in your inner self’. Then Menshiki said he take in it and want to invite the painter to his house dinner. Renbrandt; ego; border between the reality and inreality

19. Do You See Anything Behind Me?

41 years old married woman visited the house of the painter, they talked about the ‘portrait’ and his invitation.

  • The details about the ‘portrait’ of Menshiki wasn’t described. Author described only it is an unusual ‘portrait’ but a fantastic work made by the connection the painter with Mr. Menshiki.

When the painter strolled Tohoku area, he came across a late twenties girl at a family restaurant in a baytown in Miyagi. A middle aged gray-haired man (the man of white Subaru Forester) run after the girl, so the painter and the girl got out the restaurant and run away from him. Ohgai Mori; The Abe Clan; white Subaru Forester; Fool on the Hill; John Lennon; Paul McCartney; Shinagawa

They checked in at a love hotel.

They do hard sex then slept. When he waked up, she had disappeared. After a checkout he went to the family restaurant to eat breakfast. The man of white Subaru Forester was there, and he glared at the painter and his face told the painter like that ‘I exactly know where you were and what you did’. YONEX

At the house of the painter, 41 years old married woman told him that six or seven years ago, Mr. Menshiki was taken into custody in Tokyo Detention House for a insider trading or a money laundering. Tokyo Detention House;  Bluebeard’s Castle

20. A Moment Being and Anti-Being Fuse

Next morning, the painter went to the studio and faced a white canvas to foresee a thing to draw. (canvas zen). He draw a vertical line on the canvas, then started to draw the man of white Subaru Forester by a charcoal. canvas zen; a vertical line

  • Vertical line or border is an important thing of metaphor to divide up between reality and alter world.

He went to the hall of the small shrine and reflected why and how Mr. Menshiki had stayed in the hall.

Masahiko Amada visited the house and the painter told about the hall and the bell. Then the painter said ‘I have a fleeing I want to draw picture, and I’m getting to grasp a new form of art based on portrait’.

Amada told the painter that he and Yuzu had met. She asked his advice on her matters.

This night the painter woke up at 1:35 AM, and he heard the bell was ringing.

21. It’s Small, But the Blood Is Comming if You Cut

The painter was sure that someone ring the bell in the house or the studio. He went the studio but no one ring the bell, and the bell was a shelf he had placed. At that moment, he found a small man of 60 cm height wears the clothes of Japanese ancient era. He realized that the small man is the commendatore in the painting work Killing Commendatore by Tomohiko Amada. Mickey Mouse; Pocahontas; Walt Disney

At around 2:15, Commendatore became silent and vanished. The painter reflected that this world is neither reality nor dream.

22. The Invitation is Still Remain

The next, the painter saw the Japanese art work ‘Commendatore’ (Commendatore still existed in the tableau, the idea ‘Commendatore’ didn’t come out from the tableau), and consider the occurrence of last night and an excellent ability of Tomohiko Amada. van Gogh

Next morning, the painter drew the portrait of the man of white Subaru Forester. When he drew the portrait, the Commendatore emerged spoke to him and he can read the mind of the painter. awakening; Edward G Robinson; Theronias Monk; Don Giovanni; spiritual being

By this night, the Commendatore stopped ring the bell. Mozart; Don Giovanni

23. Everyone Really Exist in This World

At 13 years old, the painter and his younger sister Komichi (10 years old) traveled Yamanashi prefecture and went to the air hole of Mount. Fuji. In the hole, only Komichi entered a small wind hole and stayed the depth of there for a while. The painter greatly shocked. But she got out of the hole calmly and she said ’there’s a special place I can only go in, it’s a room for me’. Yamanashi; Mount Fuji; Louis Carol; Alice in Wonderland

Two years later, Komichi died. The painter felt Komichi had already died in the small wind hole. He thought she might live only the two years of postponement.

A Nissan Infinity limousin by Mr. Menshiki picked up the painter. Mr. Menshiki showed the painter his gorgeous house. A young bartender hired by Menshiki made balalaika for them. They talked about art, playing piano and human abilities. Nissan Infinity; komainu; Meißen; Steinway; Maurizio Pollini; balalaika; Baccarat; Koimari; abstract portrait; cerebral cortex; cosmos; micro cosmos; van Gogh; Mozart; Proust; Persian carpet

Mr. Menshiki showed the painter his writing room. He set the portrait on the room, and it went well with the setting. Schubert; Strings Quartet

Mr. Menshiki explained the lower two floors are used as a storehouse, a laundry room and a gym.

24. I Only Collect Pure Direct Informations

Mr. Menshiki and the painter ate dinner cooked by a chef hired by Menshiki. Robin Hood; Italia; Lucca; champagne; Sicilia; Catania; Verdi; Ernani; Bordeaux wein; souffre; espresso

After the dinner, Menshiki talked about the staying in the hole of the small shrine. He said ‘I want to touch the death’. They got out the terrace of the house, and Menshiki showed his military binoculars and a house on the mountain. And he said a girl may be his daughter lives in the house. border; Icarus; binoculars; Stainway; unlimited solitude

25. I Suppose The Truth Bring a Man Deep Solitude

Mr. Menshiki asked the painter to paint the portrait of the girl named Marie Akikawa and he wanted to see the girl when she would being painted. Menshiki want to only to see her growth in a roundabout way. Then Mr. Menshiki talked about the history of Tomohiko Amada studied abroad in Berlin. Stainway; Austria; the World War 2; Vienna; Berlin; Anchuluss; Germany; Hitler; the Anti-Comintern Pact; Gestapo; Nazi; Asuka era; Bremen

  • Another episode ‘Mr. Menshiki and Marie Akikawa’ begun, but there’s no necessity to .

Hakenkreuz

26. I Don’t Believe Such a Excellent Composition Exists in the World

Two days ago, the agent called the painter and told that Mr. Menshiki payed the charge of the portrait including an extra bonus and the portrait is wonderful and beyond the category of portrait.

The painter watched carefully the Killing Commedatore by Tomohiko Amada in the studio. Donna Anna; Leporello; Nazi; SS; allegory

The painter remembered and reflected that his younger sister Komichi and his visiting Yuzu’s elite family. unconsciousness; Setagaya Ward; Tokyo University

happiness; turning; affinity; solidality; single malt on the rock; Schubert; Strings Quartet;  Rosamunde

27. I Remember the Shape and Form Vividly, However…

The painter told 41 years old women that the dinner at Mr. Menshiki’s house. quality; difficulty; four of British cars; Jaguar E type; Toyota Corolla wagon; Audrey Hepburn; Peter O’Toole

The portrait of the man of white Subaru Forester completed remaining uncompleted. It indicated a ominous sign.

The painter remembered the ‘affair’ with the late twenties girl in a love hotel in Tohoku. She wanted to hit her body and strangle her neck, but he declined.

The painter reflected that the man of white Subaru Forester know the ‘thing’ with the late twenties girl, and he felt restless by the presence of the portrait of the man.

28. Franz Kafka Loved Slopes

croquis; dessin; plan; first impression; view to things

The painter asked the Commendatore that the mean of Tomohiko Amada’s ‘Killing Commendatore’ according to the incident occurred in Vienna, 1938. The Commendatore said ‘you should remain the metaphor as it is, and the code as it is’ and he said metaphorically ‘Franz Kafka loved slopes and viewed them for hours’, ‘you should grasp representation as it is’. metier; metaphor; code; truth; representation; young Marlon Brando; Elia Kazan; On the Waterfront; allegory; parable; chesha cat

29. Strange Element, There Might Be Included

Two days later, Mr. Menshiki called the painter. The painter told ‘I want to draw the portrait of Marie by voluntary will and get rid of ‘a form as your request’ to be natural feeling’. code; enigma

Mr. Menshiki called the painter and he said that Marie Akikawa had accepted the offer of her portrait by her enthusiastic will. Then, he told the the attempted assacination incident in Wien committed Tomohiko Amada. Franz Kafka; 1938; Anschluss; President Miklas; Seyß-Inquart; HItler; Himmler; KZ Mauthausen; Goebbels; Kristallnacht; Paris; Herschel Grynszpan; Rath; Candela

The next day, Mr. Menshiki called again and he told ‘Marie Akikawa will visit at 10:00 AM, Sunday’. trust; secret; view; way of thinking

The next day, the painter got a divorce notice from Yuzu. In the house, he reflected the divorce, but he can’t understand the situation, cause and thier progress. sense of mental numbness; morphine for mind

30. There’re Differences Among Individuals in Such a Thing

(…)

31. Perhaps It May Be Too Perfect

(…)

32. His Specialist Skill Was Very Useful

(…)

Details of the Book

Killing Commendatore, Book 1: The Appearing Idea
Haruki Murakami
Sinchosha, Tokyo, 24 February 2017
512 pages
ISBN: 9784103534327

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‘Novelist as a Vocation’ by Haruki Murakami is ‘essais’ about his views to literature, art and writing novel.

1: Are Novelists Tolerant Persons?

novel; novelist; literature

Murakami thinks almost all of novelists are idiosyncratic persons and hard to deal with. But they have tolerances to novel or to write novel. To write novel isn’t a difficult thing, and is a form of expression everyone easy to participate. But it’s difficult to continue to write novel in a long term. There’s a kind of a qualification.

intelligence; knowledge; low-gear; story; clitics; ‘for example’

To write novel is not suitable for smart people. Novelists change things by their consciousness to story. Novelist make use of a dynamism of difference between an original thing and a result. Smart people can’t keep on write novel. To write novel isn’t a efficient activity.

‘bovine’ work; ship in a bottle; pace

internal drive; tough endurance

Each professional novelists has a qualification or a strong core as an internal derive can’t stop writing and an tough endurance.

2. When I Became a Novelist

age 30; experiences; general; common knowledge; Jazz; coffee; liquor; the Student Movement; niche; Shigeharu Mukai; Aki Takase; difficulty; Waseda University; disturbance of university; power of moral; Shinjuku; Kabukicho

Before Murakami became a novelist, he spent an unusual life. He married when he was a university student and run a Jazz café in suburban Tokyo. His youth are a tough and hard years, but he was happy and gained wide experience.

  • Jazz café is the Japanese unique style of café, coffee shops play Jazz records all day long.

Jean Racine; Sendagaya; unsociable nature

a sunny day of 1978; the Jingu Stadium; Yakult Swallows; beer; green lawn and white ball; Dave Hilton; Charlie Manuel; double (two-base hit);

A sunny day of 1978, Murakami watched a baseball game of Yakult Swallows at the Jingo (Shrine) Stadium, Tokyo. When Dave Hilton hitter a double, Murakami hit on a notion ’Well, I may also write a novel’. After the works of Jazz café, he wrote his debut novel Hear the Wind Sing on a kitchen table everyday till late at night.

Russian novels in the 19th century; English paperbacks; Japanese contemporary novels; epiphany; Olivetti typewriter; écriture (style of text); ‘translational style’; neutral; flexible

Murakami finished the draft of his first novel, he was’t satisfied with it. So he rewrote the novel in English by an Olivetti typewriter. By rewriting in English, he got the his own rhythm of text. Then he translated that English text to Japanse. He think his style of text isn’t a ‘translational’ style, but is a neutral and flexible style of écriture.

way of expression; important moving; to play music; set of tools

Finding of an own method of writing and to finish the first novel are a ‘important moving’ for him and the feeling is ‘to play music’ rather than ‘to write a novel’.

‘good feeling’; ‘delight’; happiness

The ‘good feeling’ and ‘delight’ he gained when he wrote the first novel, are still unchanged, and he feels the happiness of writing novel every morning when he starts work.

3. About Literature Awards

literature awards; Ryunosuke Akutagawa (Literature) Prize (the Akutagawa Prize)

literary circle; ordinary life

Murakami was’t thinking of keeping away from the Japanese literary circle, he spent only a ordinary civil life and it made his unique position spontaneously.

He wasn’t content with the first and second novels, but he was glad about to get the ticket (qualification) to write novels.

a storm in a teacup; business; Academy Awards; Novel Prize; Raymond Chandler; Nelson Algren; Kurt Vonnegut; Autobiography of Studs Terkel;

Murakami treasured readers buy his book out of their own pocket, rather than literature prizes, medals and favourable reviews. To miss winning the Akutagawa Prize is good for Murakami because of not to put his name and reputation on ’an Akutagawa winning writer’.

5%; Ray Bradberry; Fahrenheit 451; YouTube; 3D Video Game

Murakami thinks 5% of people read books actively. So to read books will not die out.

member of a section committee; individualism

Murakami haven’t served a member of section committee of any literature awards. It may be abandonment of responsibility to young novelists, but he thinks his primal duty as a novelist is to continue publishing high-quality works.

qualification (ability) of a individual; it can’t be argued in the same way

4. On Originality

originality; Oliver Sacks; Anthropologist on Mars; original creativity; Beatles; Please, Please Me; the Beach Boys; Surfing USA; works has fixed value; Gustav Mahler; Thelonias Monk; classic (master piece)

To explain originality is difficult. For example, people can’t continue to hear the songs of the Beatle and the Beach Boys as novel and fresh music. It’s case by case that originalities will fede or not. The originality of the music of Gustav Mahler would be discovered by the posterities.

van Gogh; Picasso; ‘reference’; Sohseki Netsuke; Ernest Hemingway; écriture; Psyche

Novel originalities might become a ‘reference’ of fine art or literature as ‘classic’, like van Gogh, Picasso, Sohseki Natsme or Ernest Hemingway. To evaluate current contemporary works is more difficult than to evaluate ‘classics’ had became original.

artist; style; unique style; standardize; flash in the pan; Beethoven; Symphony No. 9; worth as a work

By Murakami’s opinion, requirements of original artist are below.

  1. An unique style.
  2. He can version up his unique style by his own ability.
  3. The unique style will became a standard among people’s psyche.

chronological substance; ‘marriage swindling’; illusionist; decency; Zbigniew Herbert; avant-garde or not; right-wing or left-wing; fine literature or popular literature; coordinate axis; ’custom’; ‘unwritten rule’; the counter generation

Murakami want to be a ‘unique (original) novelist’. But originalities should be judged by a collaborate work of readers with ‘certain time’.

information glutted society; expression; needs (necessities); freedom; model; natural feeling;

Murakami thinks to make an originality, it needs to reduce anything(s) by myself. To find your necessities, you should find your own spontaneous joy and pleasure. To novelists, it may be more difficult to write simple, necessary and dry words and texts rather than to write complicated, tricky and serious words. Murakami thinks his originality and root of writing novels are a free and natural feeling.

‘self who hopes for no one’; ‘despite’; writer’s block;

Murakami has no slump, because he write only when he want to write spontaneously by the natural feeling.

5. Well, What Should I Write?

training; custom(s); to read books a lot; to watch things and phenomenons; clear conclusion; ‘at present, I can’t conclude neither of them’; things ’as they are’; Paul Valéry; Albert Einstein

Young people who want to be a novelst has to read books a lot and watch things and phenomenons in detail. People who concludes smartly and immediately are not apt to a novelist. The attitude necessary for novelists is like one of ‘at present, I can’t conclude neither of them’ and to accept things ‘as they are’.

collection of things in details; unordered details; ’incoherent memories’; James Joyce; imagination; combination(s) of partial memories; Steven Soderbergh; KAFKA

When Murakami write novel he cites collection of things in details or incoherent memories. A combination(s) of partial memories makes a story.

essay (essai); materials; stock of junks; ‘magic’

When Murakami writes a novel he does’t writes essai or anything except for the novel, to concentrate using materials of memory for the novel.

experience(s); happiness; unhappiness; ordinary family

’nothing to write’; new words and style; not to explain; music; jazz; rhythm; harmony; free improvisation; ad-lib

When he first novel, he had no idea to write, so he felt ‘I only to write I have no things to write’ or make use of a feeling as ’I have no things to write’. But the feeling as ’I have no things to write’ changed ‘I can write anything freely’, then he wrote the novel like playing music while modelling the rhythm and free improvisation of jazz.

inner self; daily life; ’renewable energy’; enduring creativity

It’s easy for novelists to weave a story from inner self rather than to rely on the seriousness of material (facts). You may as well make use of materials as scenes and people of your daily life, and put your imagination to build your own story.

reality of novel; age; era; own reality; to deposit

6. Taking Side with Time: To Write Long Novels

long novels; novelette; short novel; characteristic; quality

Murakami thinks long novel and to write it are his life line or his main battle field, and short novel and novelette are place(s) of training.

’business as usual’; life and work cycle; chores (small jobs); noise

When Murakami writes a long novel, he fixes (keeps) a cycle of life and work like a ‘business as usual’ for keeping vast energy to do a very long term work.

regularity; artist; factory; a liberal; Isaac Dienessen

When Murakami do a long term work as writing a long novel, he must writes 10 pieces of manuscript just calmly everyday. Because the regularity of work is important for him.

first draft; rewrite; ’aging’ (leaving)

Murakami wrote a first draft then rewrote it freely without the care of the conclusion and the whole consistency. After a second or third rewriting, he leave the manuscript for one week or one month for ‘aging’.

my wife; editor(s) of a publisher

Then he consults and argue with his wife, and he rewrites parts in question. There’re no complete texts in novel. So act of rewriting itself is important.

galley; ’carpenter’s work’; Raymond Carver; time; ’preparation’ (arrangement); silent term; understanding; processes

Murakami rewrites many many times, and the works take a lot of patience. But he can’t help feeling happy during the rewritings. Time is one most important essential elements of writing novel, especially term of ‘preparation’ to cultivate a bud of novel. So novelists should set their schedule actively (aggresively).

7. Extremely Individual and Physical Activity

individual activity; intangible subjective things; tangible objective things

To write novel is extremely individual activity in an own writing room. It is the work to change intangible subjective things to tangible objective things. All of writing novel are works in your individual writing room, if you write a novel out of your room or outdoor.

individual motivation of ‘I want to write novels’; solitary work; ‘One day at a time.’

to obtain physical strength;

From Murakami’s individual view, to obtain physical strength is the most important element to write novel. To decrease physical strength makes decrease strength of thinking and mind.

hippocampus; neuron; combination in daily life, between physical exercise and intellectual work;

A combination in daily life between physical exercise and intellectual work ideally affects the kind of creative works of which novelists do. Murakami started running when he had became a professional writer, still now do it about a hour almost everyday.

to tell story; bottom of his consciousness; darkness of mind; collective unconsciousness; individual unconsciousness; ruin and chaos; anti-social literary man; ‘activist writer’

The basic of novelist is to tell (weave, make) story. And to make story is, in other words, to descend the bottom of my consciousnes or darkness of my mind. In the darkness, it’s mixed of a collective unconsciousness and an individual unconsciousness, the primitive age and the contemporary era.

Anthony Trollope; model; usual (ordinary) life; Franz Kafka; principal occupation; side job; concentration by taciturnity; sustainability without being discouraged

Murakami thinks necessary things of novelists are a concentration by taciturnity (reticence) not to show off like ‘Well, my inner chaos is so big like this !’, and a sustainability without being discouraged.

happiness; miracle; genius (gift); ability; technique; capacity; view of the world

types of novelist; Mozart; Schubert; Pushkin; Rimbeau; van Gogh; genius artists; quality of a way of life itself; total balance

8. About School

schools; school education; whole of education

study; to read books; to listen to music; to watch movies

Murakami had been thinking the study of school is boring. But he thought he wasn’t loafing, so that to read books, to listen to music passionately, to play baseball and to go out with girls are his important private study.

English novels; mystery; sci-fi; practical English; collage entrance examination; educational system; individual nature

When Murakami was a high-school student, he started reading English novels by himself. But he could’t obtain good scores in English tests on the school, also honor students in Japan should not read a English novel or speak English with native speakers. Because Japanese English education concentrate(d) on to gain good score on collage entrance examinations, and teach(ed) the technique for it.

interest; sports; ‘doggy characteristic’; ‘catty characteristic’; ‘characteristic like sheep’; Japanese social system; stickiness of ‘priority to numerical value’; bubble economics; wisdom of men; common sense; sophistication of system; consensus; depth; profundity; reflection

The Japanese social system emphasize on utilitarianistic efficiency and materialistic profit. But Murakami thinks Japanese people should make important on flexible and total thinkings like wisdom and common sense.

Fukushima nuclear disaster; structural defeat; economic efficiency

resurgence; development; intention; individual; association; ‘recovery place of individual’

making some mutual friends; to read many books; compound view; objective

To read many in school days made Murakami’s objective compound view and his individual place.

system of school; boring; dreaming (fantasy); efficiency; safety dogma (safety dogma); dangerous brief values; a free thinking and its axe of idea

Murakami thought schools were boring. He prefer to imaginate stories than going to schools. The most different thing to imagination is ‘efficiency’. The conclusion of the Japanese efficient social system may be the Fukushima nuclear disaster. His wish to the Japanese school education is only ‘Don’t oppress children’s imagination’.

9. How Characters That I Should Present?

characters; real person; Somerset Maugham; ’automatic pygmy’s effect’; ‘making characters’

Murakami make characters during building story automatically and naturally. Writing story makes happen details and features of characters.

persons; appearance; saying; negative characters

To write novels, you must know a lot of persons include which you don’t like. To write profound stories, you need to know and write various persons include negative, malicious and curious ones.

Raymond Chandler; Philip Marlowe; first person; third person; imaginary ‘I’

One of Murakami’s pleasure of writing novels is the thing ‘If I wish, I became anyone’. In the former half of Murakami’s career, he aimed at to weave stories by the axe of imaginary ‘I’. In the later one, he began to experiment of using the voice of third person.

naming of characters; nickname

Scott Fitzgerald; * The Great Gatsby*; J. D. Salinger; The Catcher in the Rye

To adopt third personal pronoun, Murakami felt ‘I can became almost anyone’, and he can rely a separated self on a other as a method of story telling.

unpredictable elements; fiction

Novelists create novels, at the same time certain part of self of novelists are created by novels.

character of same age as the novelist; relativization

To describe novel and characters is like a testing ‘a different self’ by unfittable shoes. So Murakami hasn’t write a main character of the same age to him.

10. Who is I Write for?

(…)

11. Going Abroad: The New Frontier

(…)

12. Place a Story Is in

(…)

Product Details

Novelist as a Profession
Haruki Murakami
Switch Publishing, Tokyo, 10 September 2015
313 pages, JPY 1944
ISBN 9784884184438
Content

  1. Are Novelists Tolerant Persons?
  2. When I Became a Novelist
  3. About Literature Awards
  4. On Originality
  5. Well, What Should I Write?
  6. Taking Side with Time: To Write Long Novels
  7. Extremely Individual and Physical Activity
  8. About School
  9. How Characters That I Should Present?
  10. Who is I Write for?
  11. Going Abroad: The New Frontier
  12. Place a Story Is in: Memories of Dr. Hayao Kawai

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